The feedback from teacher shows that I am not meeting the required standard that I should be meeting. In order to achieve the standard I need to I will have to improve my planning and research, my first drafts of my ancillary texts and my music video:
Planning and Research -
- I have already started to improve my planning and research, my teacher asked that of me that I take screenshots to show the examiner how I created something, she also asked that add more images too provide evidence of what I have being doing in order to show the examiner there is process to what I have been creating.
- What I have done which shows I have started to do this is showing evidence of me going out through filming and showing the locations I filmed, I took photos of where I filmed and posted them on my blogger, also posted the texts between me and my camera man which shows we have go out to film. I have also took screenshots of the process of making my products.
Album Release Poster -
- I need to change my image to one that offers a direct mode of address to the readers
- I also need to reduce the amount of text on it, because it is not conventional of an album release poster to have so much text
Digipak-
- My digipak is to text heavy at the top of the cover, so in order to combat this I could either reduce the size of my album title or make the image bigger so that in matches up in size against the title
Music Video-
- I need to have more costume changes so that it conform to conventions in pop music videos
- Make sure that lip syncing is in time with the lyrics of the song
- film in more locations that are conventional to pop music videos.
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